Draft 2 – Ben Welton

This is my project at the 85% Completion point.

Here I have revamped my story and added a much need video component to it. I feel that both of them tie into each other nicely and gives a good grasp on the visual aspect of the story. I added some changes to the ending scenes that will more than likely shock the reader when they see what is going on.

Here is current Twine template layout:

Here is the finished video I made about Charlie Bombay: