It feels like I am walking in the middle of nowhere, well, in fact, i am. Tommy is leading me towards the infinity of darkness. If there isn’t any moonlight, I couldn’t even tell that’s him, I would think of the person who’s walking in front of me is an evil, and we both walking on the path to the hell.
We are supposed to look for them, but now even we ourselves are in trouble. “I think we need a compass. Do you have one with you?” asked Tommy. I search my bag, there’s only some food and water; then my pull out my jacket pockets, all empty, no compass there. “Just keep walking, I think they would be around here.” I said, I know it sounds useless and unproductive, but that seems to be the only way. ///TBC
Ok great image; increase tension of scene by SHOWING details that make us realize something is wrong–sounds, gestures, bits of conversation; give a clue to their mission, but in the details; instead of saying “hell” SHOW how it is–is it hot? dark? full of enemies? the details create the scene.