Full Draft
Home Sweet Home
When I was just two years old, my parents put me on a plane and brought me to the beautiful island of Sardinia, Italy. After our first trip there, we couldn’t help but spend one month vacationing there each summer. Sardinia is where my journey begins.
The island feels like a second home to … Continue Reading ››
Full Draft
Since my story will be basically a movie (in the form of an extended trailer), the actual amount of writing is minimalistic in order to present a more visual format. I am also still working on the full story, but here's what I have:
ESCAPE
By Sara Webber
Setting down the last box and collapsing with … Continue Reading ››
Beauman_Draft (Life of Norman Nuss)
None of the parts are completely done yet.
The format has changed a bit. Instead of writing a children's book style of one long story with pictures, I want to take advantage of more of iBooks' features. Instead of having 20-25 images, I'm going to divide my story into 5 chapters (1 for each scene) and … Continue Reading ››
Full Story Draft: Josh & Andrew
Stewart draft
This is a very rough draft of the story in it's current form. Since the final piece will be audio the way the draft is setup each line is a different person talking, unless there is a sentence that is multiple lines. I will post another version that is cleaned up and more clear, but … Continue Reading ››
Triglione Full Draft
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Warnock Draft
The Mother
A bead of sweat ran down her mother’s face. Many more lay still on her forehead, glistening in the candlelight. She was burning up despite the cold wind blowing in through the window. Charlotte dabbed her head with a handkerchief.
“It’s alright, Amma, it should be over soon.” She laid her … Continue Reading ››
A Life Changing Summer Full Draft
This is the story of a summer focused on personal growth and building relationships with others.
Olivia, Grant, and Lana share their perspectives of the summer retreat they went on in blog posts. Each of them had their own challenges to face in Traverse, City. Olivia arrived excited for the summer, but soon … Continue Reading ››
Sophie Poems- Draft
I huddle in the lap of a stranger whose lap is warm.
Shaking in their lap.
I have never trusted humans,
And I wasn’t sure how to interact with this one.
I’m passed from lap to lap,
My eyes begin to droop,
Letting a few whimpers out,
I am returned to the first stranger’s lap.
While I try to drift away, there are … Continue Reading ››
Full draft
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Here is my full draft of my layout and my writing. The only thing that is missing is Caroline's story... I am still working on this part because I am debating whether I will post our actual interview (audio) or the written out text.
Full Draft
Full Draft on WordPress
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Full draft on wordpress. Working on creating the images for the blog next.
Full Draft
http://heatherkanderson.nmdprojects.net/Story_HTML/index.html
Edward W.
There were planes everywhere. The hum of the ships engines couldn’t dwarf the sound. Water lapped over the edge of the ship splashing onto the decks. The waves rocked us into our neighboring soldiers.
We weren’t just any soldier though, we were the newly formed Marines.
They assigned us an infiltration mission to Nagasaki. This … Continue Reading ››
Story Full Draft
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