Some other factors that will add to the story’s depth (discussed through Skype with Joline before break):
Spirit can be more than one thing = can both help AND hinder, just like friends and family
more indirect expression, i.e. angry with boyfriend through facial expression or body language
Dream and flashbacks could relate to a lost family member, such as her mother = ocean is wild, terrified, helpers around. All leads to NO STABILITY
regular fear added to repressed childhood fears; childhood girl may have died along with mother
She has to put on a survival mask
She must break/grieve in order to move on (through spirit)
Embrace terror in order to reclaim memories
Healing ripples back through time as well as forward through time. Wisdom and compassion as a result
Use slider with something flicker in background, out of focus shape. Lighting effects. Establish normal scene to build tension. Slight change from “normal.” Sound effects and music!
Images to help imagine the trailer: